A pretty damn good effort. Lots of variety in the levels and the music was pretty nice. Very good job, Pepper. I enjoyed it. XD
Thanks, glad you liked it! :)
Needs work Ynnub. I enjoy the story and the witty humour, all well and good. But as you said, the filesize really dumbs down the quality of the picture and can make reading a pain as well as the characters detail.
Some BG Music or voice acting would fit this well and I'd recommend giving it a shot. I'd also enjoy some character background on that last page, just so we know who's who.
Keep trying, you'll get it right.
I agree. I'm considering doing more of a "motion comic" style for the next one. ;)
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